Hi Jim,
All looks good to me. That's a time tested and well worn overall route, I think it will work great for you. If Provo doesn't work out know that South Valley Regional (U42) is really excellent and just a little north of there, tucked up right under SLC. I use to prefer staying on the north side up around Logan, but will head to South Valley from now on. They were very good to me. My brother Nate always says that it is well worth it to head over to Wendover and checkout the salt flats at Bonneville low level, he's been over that way a couple times now. I haven't done it yet, but one of these days will make it a point to. Have fun and fly safe!